Don’t Change One Word
Sentences are more than just a set of grammatical rules. There are some things that just can’t be messed with, and with some sentences, phrases, or even books, it would be a travesty to meddle with it – it is perfect as it is – even with its human violations of ‘incorrect English’ incorporated into its message. If I can use an analogy; it is somewhat like adding another dob of paint to the Mona Lisa, or a few extra bars to one of Mozart’s symphonies, or perhaps taking a hammer and chisel to Michelangelo’s sculpture of David (where the hands are out of proportion to the rest of his body). We can all have our “very good reasons” for doing a “final touch” to a masterpiece, but at what cost? Does the chiselling away of the “rude bits” on the statue of David make it better? Or the removal of the horns on the statue of Moses? (Which he admitted was a mistake, albeit, not his initially). Some things are best left alone – warts and all. When it comes to expressing a thought, or an emotion, in English writing, sometimes (or even most times) the rules of grammar,